http://sugaryandsalted.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sugaryandsalted.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sweetestjongin 2017-01-08 10:09 am (UTC)

This was a story I read progressively over three days. I might actually be slow and busy, but it's also because this is a fic that needs time. You can't just skim this, you gotta snuggle up under your warm blanket (possibly with chocolate, but that's optional) and really take your time with this. Because the characters certainly do, going at things at their own pace.

Everything built up slowly, but steadily, so my heart could twitch and ache accordingly when it burst so suddenly by Soo deciding to just kiss him already! *haha*
I like how Jongin stepped out of the frame Kyungsoo liked to put everything in, showing the self-awareness that life ain't no high school movie~
For a sec I feared there would be a quick smut scene squished in -just for the sake of it- but then I was really glad you didn't.

Last but not least I enjoyed all the space facts. I have zero clue about astronomy, but I had faith in you looking up all the little facts, so when Soo called Pluto a planet I stumbled a little, but was certain that it would be resolved later - and it did ♡

I saw this prompt, and I never expected it to become such a long, sweet story. Thanks for devoting so much love and time to this, it certainly payed off, in my opinion ♡

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