i'm in love with this! the dialogues are very funny. it was a good feel read it made me laugh a whole lot esp bc of sebaek's duo. i love the story too tho i felt so sad when jongin fag shamed kyungsoo and yet still ksoo likes him and cares for him...the things love can do rly. but in the end i'm happy jongin talked to kyungsoo again and maybe give his bff a chance coz despite the shit they've gone through they still do belong together.
also, i feel bad for chanyeol but anyway, they are humans that can be selfish at times. this school au was so realistic and that makes the story more perfect than it is.
i want to give credit to kaisoo's characterizations too. i love them having flaws like that, you just showed how human they are. like in ksoo's case keeping his feelings to himself and still being a martyr when it comes to love. he just loves jongin so much he'll do anything to make the boy happy. so admirable of him. and well, jongin has really no filter, brash but direct to the point, yet since ksoo is his bff and he loves him dearly too, it's good that he acknowledge his mistake. he deserves a second chance too anyway.
no subject
also, i feel bad for chanyeol but anyway, they are humans that can be selfish at times. this school au was so realistic and that makes the story more perfect than it is.
i want to give credit to kaisoo's characterizations too. i love them having flaws like that, you just showed how human they are. like in ksoo's case keeping his feelings to himself and still being a martyr when it comes to love. he just loves jongin so much he'll do anything to make the boy happy. so admirable of him. and well, jongin has really no filter, brash but direct to the point, yet since ksoo is his bff and he loves him dearly too, it's good that he acknowledge his mistake. he deserves a second chance too anyway.
good job on this!