Okay i kind of cried a little bit. This story is very beautiful and i like it. That peeping tom scene is weird and funny at the same time, this is my first time reading this kind of scene lol.
Im shocked when jongin said that word to kyungsoo, i was like, omg the story is humorous from the beginning but suddenly it turns to this angsty story, i cant keep up lmao. Eventho, i lowkey hoped kyungsoo doesnt forgive jongin so easily but its understandable since kyungsoo probably love him so much and its a hs au too. I think jongin's character in here is like a reckless teen and kind of immature and i think thats how you want to potray him in this story. He didn't think before he speak or act, and thats like his major flaw. Kyungsoo in here is the mature one and selfless. Eventho, jongin hurts him (directly or indirectly) but he still cares about jongin and thats what make me admires him because of his personality.
Btw, you dont have to feel sorry about the wc, i feel bad when i submit the prompt and demand a long fic. If the author is satisfied with this amount of wc, who am i to demand for more? They knew better how to write their story. I never ask for long fic anymore when i submit prompts to another fic fest.
Lastly, thank you for choosing my prompt and sharing this story with us. xoxo