I remember seeing this prompt in the list THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS UNIVERSE YOU DID A SUPERB JOB!
"...can’t behave like a normal hybrid being..." I see what you did there don't think I didn't. "It’s the third amber one he gets. He is grateful for those since they remind him of honey." Did you make Jongin Winnie the Pooh? YES YOU DID AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. "It only takes one call from Sehun to bring Chanyeol and Yixing to Jongin’s apartment. They try to convince Jongin to come out of his bathroom and talk to Kyungsoo for a few moments" I just really love how you structure paragraphs sometimes - we learn about where Jongin is after the rest of the scene is set and it just gives this wonderful richness to your writing. “You can do it.” A whisper comes from the other side of the door, it must be Yixing. I need a Yixing to encourage me in tough times too.
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Date: 2016-12-28 10:34 pm (UTC)"...can’t behave like a normal hybrid being..." I see what you did there don't think I didn't.
"It’s the third amber one he gets. He is grateful for those since they remind him of honey." Did you make Jongin Winnie the Pooh? YES YOU DID AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT.
"It only takes one call from Sehun to bring Chanyeol and Yixing to Jongin’s apartment. They try to convince Jongin to come out of his bathroom and talk to Kyungsoo for a few moments" I just really love how you structure paragraphs sometimes - we learn about where Jongin is after the rest of the scene is set and it just gives this wonderful richness to your writing.
“You can do it.” A whisper comes from the other side of the door, it must be Yixing. I need a Yixing to encourage me in tough times too.
Thank you for writing ^_^