Date: 2017-01-10 02:33 pm (UTC)
ok so where do i start. this was amazing!!! i kind of started off focusing on the wrong pairing bc i got distracted by junmyeon and his photographer boyfriend whom he had been with for four and a half years and loved very much. i got too swayed by the suchen early on but!! the chankai soon kept up and i couldn't stop reading from then on. i loved how there were detailed parts, just the right amount without it being too much and unnecessary. you managed to focus on the chankai as both a plot (the fake dating) and main pairing even through lots of other side plots (chanyeol's writing career, kyungsoo, kind of meeting the parents, the preparations, the wedding) and side characters. the way you wrote the wedding enabled me to picture how warmly beautiful and elegant and homely it was! the "problem" with kyungsoo was neatly solved and, of course, i can't simply miss out on the baeksoo, can i? tHE BAEKSOO. wow. who knows, maybe kyungsoo's the type who's into bench-pressing people. on a more, uh, family-appropriate note, i'm still wondering how you managed to include some of the pairings i ship most. honestly that was a very great read. and the chankai!!!!! was utterly sweet and all sorts of perfect. i loved this so much thank you for writing! :D
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06.03.17 :: Prompting Starts
06.30.17 :: Prompting Ends
07.03.17 :: Claiming Starts
08.28.17 :: First Check-In
10.30.17 :: Second Check-In
11.24.17 :: Claiming Ends
12.18.17 :: Final Submissions
12.26.17 :: Postings Start